Wednesday, April 25th, 2012

Two Early Poems By Odd Future's Earl Sweatshirt

I didn't even know that Thebe Kgositsile, a.k.a. Earl Sweatshirt, went to my elementary school before I started leafing through old copies of "The Poet Tree," the poetry collection from our alma mater, Community Magnet School in Los Angeles.

His poem "Mummies" (my favorite of the two here) needs no explanation, except to note that it's incredible to see a five- or six-year-old with the swagger of Biggie or the like. This bigger-than-the-world-and-all-the-scary-things-in-it mentality is something that many rappers front, but what makes Earl Sweatshirt so amazing is that he's genuinely had it since he was a tot (just compare his poem to the one below his to see the difference).

Usually the poems we wrote in elementary school were assigned to us with a specific theme in mind, like a color or animal, and we had to fill in the rest (i.e. one student's poem "Blue," which goes "Blue is the ocean/Blue is a cup/Blue is a marker/Blue is the sky./I like blue.") Paging through, it's easy to see which poems had built-in structures and themes, and perhaps Thebe was supposed to write one that told a story. But really, there is no other poem in this thing that's anything like "Mummies."

Carmen Johns is a student at Oberlin College.

7 Comments / Post A Comment

BillyMilder (#723)

'fuck v-necks i'm the rapper to invest in'

Did anyone else read "The Cat, the Rat and the Mat" and think it was… beautiful? Am I just going crazy? Or have I just been in engineering school for too long?

"'Now I can relax,' said the Rat."

emberglance (#7,305)

@Virginia Purvis@facebook The cat got chased off the mat by a freaking rat and was so scared it never returned. What is wrong with you? Since when did the rat sit (or sleep) on the rat. Disturbing.

barnhouse (#1,326)

@emberglance It's POV rat! Also, I think the cat just got fed up, rather than scared.

Maria Elcy (#232,647)

Very nice, thanks for sharing.

fran5seaca (#232,592)

@Maria Elcy lol

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