I really try to never post mean comments or even comment much on articles, but I'm most disturbed not by the topic or author's point of view, but that the Awl would publish such bad writing. I totally sympathize with the author's point of view; like many commenters I've gone through similar experiences and struggles with my feelings about Israel (as an American-Israeli) -- but this sounds like it was written by a teenager. I was almost expecting to see an "lol" or "like omg" in there. As a writer and editor who has enjoyed many articles published by the Awl, and who thinks this topic is a worthy one, I wonder why such flimsy writing was published? I get offended by lazy writing and editing more than any political topic. I'm equally frustrated with Israel, but I just wish the author had displayed more thoughtfulness, insight, reflection--this essay is a string of sentences ala "What I did on my summer vacation." We need some standards here, folks! Elegant, persuasive writing actually makes an impact; I'm surprised an editor at the Awl didn't work with the author to develop the piece and allow it to deepen. The looseness and sarcasm of the writing is subpar. I'm being snobby, and I hope all writers and editors out there feel empowered to do the same. Quality of writing should matter. Sigh.
On Life After Zionist Summer Camp
I really try to never post mean comments or even comment much on articles, but I'm most disturbed not by the topic or author's point of view, but that the Awl would publish such bad writing. I totally sympathize with the author's point of view; like many commenters I've gone through similar experiences and struggles with my feelings about Israel (as an American-Israeli) -- but this sounds like it was written by a teenager. I was almost expecting to see an "lol" or "like omg" in there. As a writer and editor who has enjoyed many articles published by the Awl, and who thinks this topic is a worthy one, I wonder why such flimsy writing was published? I get offended by lazy writing and editing more than any political topic. I'm equally frustrated with Israel, but I just wish the author had displayed more thoughtfulness, insight, reflection--this essay is a string of sentences ala "What I did on my summer vacation." We need some standards here, folks! Elegant, persuasive writing actually makes an impact; I'm surprised an editor at the Awl didn't work with the author to develop the piece and allow it to deepen. The looseness and sarcasm of the writing is subpar. I'm being snobby, and I hope all writers and editors out there feel empowered to do the same. Quality of writing should matter. Sigh.